Monday, April 9, 2012

Norwescon 35


In the words of William Shatner
CON!!!!

Easter Weekend was Norwescon and I put an ad out in the handout magazine and so I thought it would be fun to go as well!  I found there was like a million panels on writing craft, so well worth my time.

For those that don’t know what Norwescon is, it’s one of the largest regional science fiction and fantasy conventions in the US. 

What an interesting 3 days for my writing education!!!
I met many different kinds of authors and even had the opening page to Corporate Policy critiqued!  

Below you can find my review on each panel I took, if you'd like to read about it. I have to say, it was cool to be able to hear from and talk with authors that are well sold, to those that are about at the same level I am right now, just getting started. Every author I saw at the convention was, friendly, willing to take a moment to talk after a panel or in the halls, and everyone of them truly pleased help a starting author.

I’m already got some ideas for a panel or two I’d like to added next year and I’ve got the goal of becoming a panelist if I can. It’s something that I need to look into. If you can’t already tell, I’ll be back there next year no matter what.
After talking with Del, the last few years they hadn’t had many writing panels/workshops and so this year was a great step back in the right direction for them. Bravo.



The list of panels I took:
First Pages (where I was critiqued)  - Cat Rambo and Caren Gussoff

This may have been one of the few panels based on the actual art of writing and less about the business side of it.
It was geared directly at our work and it was kind of neat to hear them read our work aloud. It gave me chills! They picked about 9 first pages. Mine was the first read and it was cool to be the first, I think because I was talked about the most. The overall feedback I was given most:  I need to tell less and show more.  Something I have been working on.

But when the class started and then Cat stat down and her first word were “Dan Hollis….” I was like OH $H!T”

There was one opener that really took the cake if you ask me, it started out talking about Facebook poles and I loved it. Del agreed that it was the best one of the ones they picked to read.  I hope it get published, it could be epic.


Escaping the White room – Julie McGalliard, S.A Bolich, Jak Koke, Jack Skillingstead

This was a little on the slow side, but the message was good. It was about making sure you are giving good descriptions to paint a world about your reader. Not tossing them into a white room that has no details.
As I said, slow, but I’m glad I went!  It’s something that I need to work on as well.


Freelancing 101 – James L Sutter, Jennifer Brozek, Stan!, Scott Gable

This was one Del wanted to check out, it was more on the making stories and writing for RPG companies.  But I did get a few details about the biz that I didn’t know before. I have to say, listening to Pathfinder’s James Sutter talk about the business was very enlightening and it was fun to talk with him a few minutes after the panel.


Creating a Novel Outline – Mary Robinette Kowal, Irene Radford, Benjamin Tate


This was a good one, with well-spoken people. It showed me about the world of making a synopsis for a novel. This is something that I have been able to avoid with independent publishing and really didn’t know much about it.  That will all change later this year when I start looking at the larger publishing world.
5 page synopsis, 30 page synopsis, making character arcs, and query letters. They gave you the 50, 000 foot view of it.
Need to look at getting the book “Brewing Up Fine Fiction” by Irene Radford.

Another thing they talked about was, building up your chops from short stories to novels takes time. Same with shorter novels to longer novels, it not something you can just jump into.  I’ve been working with novellas, 50k to 58k range for the Dinatech series, I’ll made one manuscript at 99k, I’ll be interested to see how my next 100k attempt looks, because my last full novel attempt was by accident, it was only supposed to be 50k! 


Writing for the Young and Young at Heart – Lisa Mantchev, Dennis R. Upkins, Diedre Phoenix

There was one other person on this panel and I didn’t get their name I really should have gotten that.
This was the first really funny writing panel I’d had and Lisa was a great moderator! Dennis and Lisa play off one another very well and I think the two of them should write a book together.  It was a good look at some things I’d already knew about the YA (Young Adult) writing field.  Like Sarah Dessen, most of the authors on the panel didn’t really know that they were making a YA book till they had made it.
It was very interesting to hear them talk about how adult the YA field really is and that many adult situations do get put into this genre of book. The major factor is the age of your protagonist will label you YA from what I understand.


How I Sold My Novel – Rhiannon Held, Dennis R. Upkins, Christopher Paul Carey

This was not a good panel and the worst one that I attended at the con.
All the authors that had gotten lucky or found the right break in their first book,  so there was no real suffering for years and multiple books to get one sold.
I really didn’t take much away from this panel. It would have been a great panel for Mike Shepherd Moscoe to be on!


What I Wish Someone Had Told Me – Eileen Gunn, James L. Sutter, Mike Shepherd Moscoe, Nancy Kress, A.M. Dellamonica

I’ll start out by saying, this was another very fun panel and that Nancy Kress made this panel amazing.
NANCY KRESS IS MY HERO!
Really she had some great advice and even went so far as to say “Be careful whom you sleep with in this business! Because they are going to be there for life. Really!  They will be across the table from you at one these conventions and you’ll just be shaking your head, what was I thinking!”
I was talking with her the next day and she confessed she’d had a drink before the panel felt she might have made a fool of herself.  But not in my eyes, the stories that she told about her critique groups and getting published were really great.
Eileen Gunn also passed on a great quote she’d been told: 
The key to becoming a great writer is: One’s ability to overcome your natural and very real revolution to your own writing.
That one got around of well deserved applause. 
Mike also talk about having to cut out the first 20 chapters of his first novel before he could get it to sell. This would have been great in the “How I Sold My Novel” panel as I was saying.


Should You Publish an E-Book First – Leah Cutter, Mike Shephard Moscoe, Matt Youngmark, Ken McConnell

This was a very informative look at how authors are using the e-publishing world to release books that they can’t or won’t traditionally publish. Some of the information they passed on I knew and was doing. It was good to see that I wasn’t off base with my work so far and that when I was talking with the panelists, it sounded like I was on the right track! Ken told me in the next panel that he felt I was doing the right things.
I will say I could have spent a little more time with formatting for Electric Disease and so that will be a priority for Corporate Policy.

New Media DIY: Self Publishing – Julie Hoverson, Ken McConnell

This was a good panel and I glean a little more information out of it. It was interesting to talk with others on how they are promoting themselves and find a few new ways to push myself out there.
I need to find me a podcast buddy! I’ll have to look around for that.
Also, I might look at expanding my beta readers group to some people that I don’t know at all!

Independent & Small Press Publishing - Sandra Damiana Buskirk, Jennifer Brozek, Patrick Swenson, Scott Gable

This one had panelist that were independent publishing owners, but they were doing it in the traditional format of larger publushers.
Things you’ll  need for a good publishing house of any kind:
Story Editors, Copy Editors, Graphic Designers, Art Directors, Type Setters, PR Directors

AOA Publishing is not here yet, but maybe soon? J  

Ones for fun:
Victorian Sex -
OMG! This was a great panel with standing room only by the time we got there! We thought it could be fun after all work panels we sat through that day. With a few drinks in us, we headed up to see what it was all about.
Some of the stuff they did back in the Victorian times was just simply crazy! If you get the time and really want to know, you should brows your favorite search engine for Victorian Prostitution! There are a lot of pictures of the time and might not make you feel so bad about what you see today on the web. ;)

Monster Mash -
This was our mid Saturday cool down workshop and it was a BLAST! You cut up stuffed animals and you sew them back together into something…horrible!

Please meet Victor!


Wednesday, April 4, 2012

Click here for steamy ads!

Normally I don't do a blog this soon, but I wanted to help push the love with the whole cross blogging thing!
I've been given the honor of being on Red Tash's Wednesday blog and if you haven't read it here is a link:

Everyone say hai to Red!
I'm reading her book This Brilliant Darkness , pick it up if you get the chance.

And on to a few other things that are KILLING ME:

Ads, I’ve had just about enough of ads. Sweet Baby Jesus, I can’t even go to my favorite sports page without having to fight through a sea of ads just to READ what they have to say! Okay, it was annoying enough when it was ads at the top and along the right side, but now they are coming up in the middle over what you want to read and you have to click very carefully at a close link, in the hopes that it really does close the ad and not just click you through to a spyware laden page of doom.
I work very hard to make sure anyone that wants to read my stuff has an ad free experience as I can give them and most of the people that I really like to follow are the same. Such as Sara Dessen's page, I have to give that girl props for how clean her site is. I think that, as much as it's going to hurt me, I'm going to avoid places that use aggressive ads even if it means missing articles by my favorite writers. I'm just done with it, totally done. If I want ads all over my page it better be awesome porn!

Another thing I'm finished with....
I am FINISHED with the re-write of Corporate Policy!!!
It's been a long few months but it's ready for my beta reading team, then once I'm done going through the feedback it's off to my copy editor. There is still a long few months of work. I still have a lot of graphics to get done as well. I want this one to come together a little nicer than the last book. I said that I wanted to get the book out about mid October, but I think that I might try and push for September. Also as promised, I'm going to be doing a dual release of the first book and second book in paperback. 

I have to make some choices, do I write a new book idea that bubbled up in my disturbed head or go back and do the re-write for Devil N' Jack. 

I could really use some feed back from you all. Do I walk into another rewrite or do I go off and play with my new idea. Jack is a book that I wanted to agent shop with, but Oil and Water could be a good shopper product for a Young Adult audience. 

I was talking with my wife and she did raise another great point about what is hot on the market right now, it's not just YA books, it's Sci-Fi YA.
I told her that would be easy I would just add a laser to my book and then it could be Sci-Fi as well. You see, as the end of every chapter I could write about the laser gun!

Chapter 1
Blaw blaw blaw...
Some where in Kentucky, a man thinks up a laser gun.
Chapter 2
Blaw blaw blaw...
A man in Kentucky patents his laser gun.
Chapter 8
Blaw I love you blaw...
A man makes a laser gun.

You see, Sci-Fi! That wasn't so hard was it?
I'll call the book: "A love story and a laser gun"
There are just so many ways that I could go right now. GAH!
I'll be at NorWesCon Friday and Saturday and I'm bringing a crap ton of post cards to give out to go along with my add in there flyer book thing of goodness.
Last order of business, can you tell me if twice a month for a blog post is enough? I could try and push them up to once a week but they would be shorter.
SO: Longer and twice a month OR shorter and once a week

Friday, March 30, 2012

I was hit by a train! And other shameless ways to plug your blog.


Sorry about that, now that you are here, no train has hit me yet, but with enough votes I'll make a video that will satisfy this request.  
Here I'll make it up to you:  
Angry Bird of Prey - Ahh, Toby put this up, I'm in love. 

Month 4… already? Where in the hell did the time go? I mean, it’s just gone! 
I look at what I’ve done, never in my life can I look back and say that I’ve been more productive than I have in the last year. Yet I still see a long road before me. I still have a goal (a huge goal) before me.  
I will get and agent! 
I will traditionally publish! 
Ok enough yelling. 
Crowning achievement of the week: Marissa Meyer friended me on goodreads.com, so a shout out to her  New York best seller YA book, take a read of Cinder if you haven't yet, a very cool twist on a story you know rather well! :)
I was driving into work this morning when I looked over to see a guy standing by the side of the road, he was facing away from traffic and for some reason my first thought was that he was reliving himself into a tree. Gawd, don't ask me why, I don't know. Taking a second look I saw that he was looking up at a blossoming cherry tree, he was just enjoying the view. Perhaps I'm going to fast, I need to just sit back and enjoy what life has put in front of me? I've been running myself ragged the last 2 weeks at work and when that is done I enjoy a little sports before I go home and plug into my story for another 3 to 4 hours. I think it just might be time to go out there and experience some of life again. 
But, I'm getting in the death throws of my rewrite, I can see the end in sight, and as long at it's not a train, I'm going to make it! I'm sure that the rewrite for my first book was a lot worse, but that was like a year ago and I don't remember, so it wasn't!  

Another subject on my writing, I've been reading "Super Sad True Love Story" by Gary Shteyngart,(Yes Mr. Spellcheck that is right) If you aren’t reading this book you should be. Pick it up as soon as you can.  
Reading this + thoughts about one liners that I want to use in my Twitter/Facebook/blog/novel that are not appropriate for conversation with anyone. I mean there are some lines in this book that are holy hell funny, but how do you go home for Christmas and hug your mom with those dirty, dirty hands!?  Where is it appropriate to use these? Some people would call it art, others vulgar. I mean I made a racist joke on a friend's Facebook and then I started to wonder if people were judging me. One of the most awkward things I've had to do was write a scene that was kind of personal and watch the person across from me read something that is kind of...personal. In the back of my head I'm going. "OH GOD DON'T READ THAT!" (I'm yelling again, too much coffee) I've slowly been able to pull that feeling back. I can't tell you the jumpiness I felt when I self-published that first book, anyone, ANYONE could read it and I can't wave my hand over the page and say. "You know what, lets just skip past this." 

I’m on Twitter – I never wanted to be, but a lot of authors use it, so maybe I should too. Oh gawd, I'm giving into peer pressure. Sarah Dessen, if you start smoking I'll have to join you! (I thought I said I was going to stop being so loud?) You can’t have too much pride when you are looking to advertise.  Already I've had to get used to the idea that I'm only allowed 140 well chosen charters. I'm going to have to learn bigger words that can fill paragraphs of meaning with just a single word. Currently I'm "Twittering" as a way to let others know how my rewrite efforts are going.  Umm I think I'm supposed to say. @robertdufalo - Follow me, or I'll kill you. (tee hee) No I mean it, when I go on my cocaine induced, 'roid-rage fueled world destruction tour, only my twitter followers will be saved.  
How's that for ad slogan. "Follow me, or else."  

I had a panic moment when I was downloading a new audiobook for my iPod... 
I have so much money wrapped up in digital media that I'm becoming truly worried for it's protection! I don't mean that I'm going to find it beat up in some back ally, I mean that if my raid system has a bad hair day and too many drive heads crash at once (hard drives need airbags) I could be left in a world of media-less hurt! Between my music, movies, and now the ever growing collection of my own manuscripts I have a lot tied up in my computers.  (Fun fact: Rob spends 15+ hours of every day in front of a computer) I'm in trouble! I'm thinking about Amazon for my storage, I need to look at something: large, safe, secure, and don't  cost me two goats a month to keep.  

See you in two weeks with a completed rewrite,
Robert


Thursday, March 15, 2012

I shouted and the only reply was my echo.

And Batman said "BAM!"
I always wanted to do a comic! This might be a close as I get the job! :)
I'm starting to get a very Robot Chicken idea here that won't end well for getting any of my other projects done -_-

With that I welcome you to my 10th blog post here on illiteratemind! It just feels like 2 years ago I started this little thing...because it was! I've moved away from the idea of it, but not heart of what it was, about being an author!


I was starting to get worried that I was running out of things to talk about in my blog. Of course I don’t know what I was worried about, I’m a wind bag with something to say on everything!
Lets get the suck out the way first!
Electric Disease 0 sales, 0 Amazon Prime shares for March.
Ok onto the fun stuff!
Books need outtakes:
I was looking over my millionth typo and I got the idea that I’m going to make a book of the best typos. I may even include notes that I get returned from my editors.
People love the outtake from movies. I could see the same being fun for a book!
















I'm starting to think I'm over working my Editor


More promotions!:
I've completed a few awesome things for Electric Disease, I'm done with my work for my Norwescon ad, it's going to show up in their book! To go along with it, I've created 500 post cards that I'm going to hand out to...anyone that wants one! I'm going to look into having a few set out at coffee places that I go to, and maybe a few bars! Anthem Coffee in Puyallup took a few to give away! So come in and buy their coffee!
I say, it feels strange to be doing work for Electric Disease when I'm editing Corporate Policy and I'm working on From Beer to Apocalypse. I haven't even looked at Electric Disease since last October but I'll still be pushing it well into the end of this year. It's like 20% of your time is making the book and the other 80% pushing the book like a drug dealer.
To go along with our publishing effort on FBtA I'm going to be making business cards that we will be able to use to promote our web book and websites. I need to make, or have made, a good AOA Publishing logo. Something all shiny! Anyone out there looking to do a little work? (I don't pay well) :)
I've just finished my guest blog entry for Amber on Lunar I'll add a link to it on my website for this soon. I'll be working on one for Eric's next.

How good of a reader am I?:
I talk with friends and they always tell me about authors I should read. "Have you heard of X because I really like their work!" and no I've never read anything by X, I haven't even heard of X and it makes me feel like I'm not in touch with my trade as I should be! In fact the more I look at it, the more I realize that I don't read that many authors at all! GOD LORD I'M HORABLE AT THIS LITERATURE THING!
Then again maybe not? I've always believe that even if all you do is sit around and read comics, you ARE indeed reading and you are letting your mind paint a lovely story. I read on the order of 300+ manga a year. Around that, I read everything that Kelley Armstrong even thinks about writing before she writes it. (Please no one tell her I found a way to hack into her mind.)
In the end I come the conclusion that I'm really just a little to focused in what I read and that I need to branch out. I'm going to work on this, next time a list of authors I've read that I didn't know about before.

Corporate Policy Updates:
I'm done with Chapter 4 and working on 5 of 8. It was 7 chapters but I hit something that I didn't like and I needed to do some expansion, chapter 5 are always messy for me. I think that I'm going to hit my goal of being in beta by April 1st if I can work a few extra hours on my added chapter to smooth it out. If you haven't looked at May Barry's blog, you should really see the one he just put up about re-writing. I have to totally agree with him! "Rewriting. It’s like writing, only with less visible progress." He makes me laugh and I can relate to his comments more now that I've been doing this for a while. Also he accepted me as a friend on Facebook, that's kind of neat. Most authors including myself just have a public page that people can like. This feels a lot more personal.
Oh right, we were talking about Corporate Policy; with Electric Disease I had a very closed stage for Clara and Dan to play in. That made it easier to write, they were trapped in a building and so the setting was confined to that space. With this one, I'm finding that Dan and Clara have much more space to work with and it almost feels too open, I feel like I should slap them in a cage in order to keep walls around what they could possibly do.
I've started setting timelines of when the art for the cover will be done and I'm thinking that I'm going to do a print on demand for both book one and two in paperback. Once CP is out for beta I'm going to finish up the conversion for the cover on ED and then I think that it will be ready for the print shop.
I'm also really itching to start work on Oil and Water, there is some foot work to do in the prep, people to call, permission to get. It's going to be a nice project. I think I want to get most of the manuscript done by Nov 1st. Because if I can, then I can start work on book three of the Dinatech series.

Other things that are neat:
A'mee found this article, I thought it was great reading for those looking to write anything someone else might look at:
A lot going on right now in my book world! I hope everything is good with you!
Robert